Theme: Intersections
Church Rafters by: Bradley Condiff
Judge 1: A deeper depth of field and a tighter crop would give the illusion of being in the building, rather than just viewing a picture of the building from the inside. The concept of a black & white foreground versus a color background gives this photograph a high composition mark. Nice subject. Judge 2: Great sense of depth. Keep going back and forth about the placement of the door and boat in the middle of the pict. The three classic church windows make a case for it, the off center beams, diagonal shadows could balance it or make a case against it. Might be better with fully centered, static formal balance, might not. I think I'm ok with it, how about you? Love the linear beams, shadows. Great feel of the decay and the bright ocean beyond. Must have waited for the ship, but might be even better without it. Does it add to the concept: the decaying building with bright tropics beyond? Sky is overexposed, tough lighting - good HDR candidate. Patch of light mid lft. from window is distracting, needs dodging. Judge 3: Nice composition and exposure.
Judge 1: A deeper depth of field and a tighter crop would give the illusion of being in the building, rather than just viewing a picture of the building from the inside. The concept of a black & white foreground versus a color background gives this photograph a high composition mark. Nice subject. Judge 2: Great sense of depth. Keep going back and forth about the placement of the door and boat in the middle of the pict. The three classic church windows make a case for it, the off center beams, diagonal shadows could balance it or make a case against it. Might be better with fully centered, static formal balance, might not. I think I'm ok with it, how about you? Love the linear beams, shadows. Great feel of the decay and the bright ocean beyond. Must have waited for the ship, but might be even better without it. Does it add to the concept: the decaying building with bright tropics beyond? Sky is overexposed, tough lighting - good HDR candidate. Patch of light mid lft. from window is distracting, needs dodging. Judge 3: Nice composition and exposure.
Church Rafters by: Bradley Condiff
Judge 1: A deeper depth of field and a tighter crop would give the illusion of being in the building, rather than just viewing a picture of the building from the inside. The concept of a black & white foreground versus a color background gives this photograph a high composition mark. Nice subject. Judge 2: Great sense of depth. Keep going back and forth about the placement of the door and boat in the middle of the pict. The three classic church windows make a case for it, the off center beams, diagonal shadows could balance it or make a case against it. Might be better with fully centered, static formal balance, might not. I think I'm ok with it, how about you? Love the linear beams, shadows. Great feel of the decay and the bright ocean beyond. Must have waited for the ship, but might be even better without it. Does it add to the concept: the decaying building with bright tropics beyond? Sky is overexposed, tough lighting - good HDR candidate. Patch of light mid lft. from window is distracting, needs dodging. Judge 3: Nice composition and exposure.
Judge 1: A deeper depth of field and a tighter crop would give the illusion of being in the building, rather than just viewing a picture of the building from the inside. The concept of a black & white foreground versus a color background gives this photograph a high composition mark. Nice subject. Judge 2: Great sense of depth. Keep going back and forth about the placement of the door and boat in the middle of the pict. The three classic church windows make a case for it, the off center beams, diagonal shadows could balance it or make a case against it. Might be better with fully centered, static formal balance, might not. I think I'm ok with it, how about you? Love the linear beams, shadows. Great feel of the decay and the bright ocean beyond. Must have waited for the ship, but might be even better without it. Does it add to the concept: the decaying building with bright tropics beyond? Sky is overexposed, tough lighting - good HDR candidate. Patch of light mid lft. from window is distracting, needs dodging. Judge 3: Nice composition and exposure.
