Cross, Swirls and Lines by: Beverly Morton-Goble
Judge 1: The lack of exif data takes away from the overall score, however the picture has a very serene quality. It's certainly a beautifully colorful subject. Judge 2: The formal, balance, centered composition is perfect for the subject and the artist's statement. The saturation of colors in the window is gorgeous. The dark blacks in the wings do a good job of creating the dark, dramatic mood and making the glass luminous in contrast. But the composition focuses on the cross and circle, which are dead in the deep shadows - they need more detail shadow interest, something. The overall tone is just too dark, the proportion of dark to light is a static 50/50. Judge 3: Good color and I like composition. Seeing more of dark areas would add something.

Cross, Swirls and Lines by: Beverly Morton-Goble
Judge 1: The lack of exif data takes away from the overall score, however the picture has a very serene quality. It's certainly a beautifully colorful subject. Judge 2: The formal, balance, centered composition is perfect for the subject and the artist's statement. The saturation of colors in the window is gorgeous. The dark blacks in the wings do a good job of creating the dark, dramatic mood and making the glass luminous in contrast. But the composition focuses on the cross and circle, which are dead in the deep shadows - they need more detail shadow interest, something. The overall tone is just too dark, the proportion of dark to light is a static 50/50. Judge 3: Good color and I like composition. Seeing more of dark areas would add something.
Original size: 1500px x 1072px |
Current: 400px x 286px |
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filename: Cross, Swirls & Lines 1 |