Theme: Still Life
Smooth Shave by Bill Carpenter
Judge 1 Comments:Top of brush cut off, distortion in brown bottle. A little too busy, I don't know what to look at.
Judge 2 Comments:I would have liked to have seen more of the girl's face, and maybe stagger the centered elements. I like the use of the different shaving items and the color lends itself to the old time theme.
Judge 3 Comments:A captivating idea; composition is weakened by too many elements--bottle competes with brushstand, thus no central focus.
Judge 1 Comments:Top of brush cut off, distortion in brown bottle. A little too busy, I don't know what to look at.
Judge 2 Comments:I would have liked to have seen more of the girl's face, and maybe stagger the centered elements. I like the use of the different shaving items and the color lends itself to the old time theme.
Judge 3 Comments:A captivating idea; composition is weakened by too many elements--bottle competes with brushstand, thus no central focus.
Smooth Shave by Bill Carpenter
Judge 1 Comments:Top of brush cut off, distortion in brown bottle. A little too busy, I don't know what to look at.
Judge 2 Comments:I would have liked to have seen more of the girl's face, and maybe stagger the centered elements. I like the use of the different shaving items and the color lends itself to the old time theme.
Judge 3 Comments:A captivating idea; composition is weakened by too many elements--bottle competes with brushstand, thus no central focus.
Judge 1 Comments:Top of brush cut off, distortion in brown bottle. A little too busy, I don't know what to look at.
Judge 2 Comments:I would have liked to have seen more of the girl's face, and maybe stagger the centered elements. I like the use of the different shaving items and the color lends itself to the old time theme.
Judge 3 Comments:A captivating idea; composition is weakened by too many elements--bottle competes with brushstand, thus no central focus.
