Greengrass Music by Lori Aulin

Judge 1 Comments:Nice vanishing point and composition. Two things that could have made this image better is 1.) not having the break in the extreme upper right-hand corner (crop closer) and 2.) the highlight on wood on the top of piano pulled my eye off of the page.

Judge 2 Comments:Great use of depth of field, though image doesn't make sense except for the play on words in title.

Judge 3: CommentsWould be more powerful if the entire image were in focus. Piano is cropped too tight for the title. White keys are blown out.

Greengrass Music by Lori Aulin

Judge 1 Comments:Nice vanishing point and composition. Two things that could have made this image better is 1.) not having the break in the extreme upper right-hand corner (crop closer) and 2.) the highlight on wood on the top of piano pulled my eye off of the page.

Judge 2 Comments:Great use of depth of field, though image doesn't make sense except for the play on words in title.

Judge 3: CommentsWould be more powerful if the entire image were in focus. Piano is cropped too tight for the title. White keys are blown out.